What you wrote, don't sound like poetry. It seems, that poetry would cause much fears. |
This is the language of reality |
you cannot focus on a single subject |
First I separate this water of chaos into two waters. One beyond and one above. Then I make a border between the two waters, so that they cannot intermix. The water above I will call heaven. The water beyond I call world. The border between is a stronghold and I call it firmament. |
dadabe wrote: |
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Then I will give him three gifts, so that his wishes can become true. The first gift I will give tomorrow. |
Today I will reveal the great secret of my creation. And then you will know all, how my creation works. I always create two molds of all things, a border between and an interaction between. Now let's bring light to my creation. And also there are two molds of light. The first light is an lantern. I call this lantern the lantern of the wise. And a person, who carries such a lantern is a person of great wisdom, because he can see many things, which others without such a lantern can't see. The second light is a book. And this book contains my words. But this book is never finished and always in writing. A person, who has such a book is a great and bright king and can understand many things, which others without such a book can't understand. And such a king, can make very good decisions, which is the work, a king should do. But the book isn't a written book, which you can find in a library. If a king wants to hear my words, he has to listen very well, what other people say. But the difficulty is, the king don't only hear my words, but other words too. So he often don't know, what are my words and what is the truth. And then he shall ask the wise. And the wise can see, what the king can hear. And the wise can't see the false words, what the king heared, and so he can tell the king the truth. And so the king can rule wise and well and the works are all done well. And all, what I have created is such an analogy to heaven and world and the firmament. An so can a person, who looks very deep in only one of my creatings, understand all of heaven and world. And now we can use the light of the lantern and the light of my book for rearranging the primordial chaos in the post of Garminic, that this will become very well works. And you now will see, how this is done. Let's the great opus begin. Let's breathe life into this creation. Now I enthrone my proconsules in this world. The lantern I give to Garminic. The book I give to CodeMonkey. |
dadabe wrote: |
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"Now my gifts" |
LB wrote: |
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Naturally, as they would, having once again derailed a thread, entirely. |
chrisname wrote: |
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Your poetry is bad and you should feel bad. |